Evaluation 4
Thursday, 22 February 2018
Monday, 19 February 2018
Sunday, 18 February 2018
Monday, 12 February 2018
Feedback
Feedback - why I made my changes
I got feedback on my last digipak and peoples comments were:
1. That the grey on the outside on my digipak looked disjointed with the inside and looked like two separate digipaks -- therefore I decided to change the outside ones to black with bold colours to match the inside
2. That the writing on the inside colours with the lyrics was too large and therefore lost some of the effect -- I have now changed the writing to make it smaller and add more of the lyrics.
3. I used too many fonts -- I have now changed the fonts I used to the same font on the front of the album and the digipak poster to create synergy and one other font on the back/binder and lyric page so that inly two fonts have been used making my digipak flow better.
4. The colour of the triangles was wrong -- The colour on the triangles were too pastel like therefore I used the pipette tools to pick out the colours from the lips and make the triangles bolder and match them to create continuity throughout the digipak.
5. The poster should link more to the album cover -- the poster needed to link more as it was advertising the album therefore I changed the poster to match the album cover giving more continuity and a better branding of my artist.
6. The back cover needed changing -- I completely changed my back over to link in more with the rest of the digipak and the video, I used the lips I had used in a previous slide however added some distortion to give it more manipulation and make it more interesting.
7. The back cover font was too big -- I made the font on the back cover smaller as it was too big and made it look less authentic.
8. I also added binders and changed the font on the binder to create more synergy wit the rest of the digipak.
I got feedback on my last digipak and peoples comments were:
1. That the grey on the outside on my digipak looked disjointed with the inside and looked like two separate digipaks -- therefore I decided to change the outside ones to black with bold colours to match the inside
2. That the writing on the inside colours with the lyrics was too large and therefore lost some of the effect -- I have now changed the writing to make it smaller and add more of the lyrics.
3. I used too many fonts -- I have now changed the fonts I used to the same font on the front of the album and the digipak poster to create synergy and one other font on the back/binder and lyric page so that inly two fonts have been used making my digipak flow better.
4. The colour of the triangles was wrong -- The colour on the triangles were too pastel like therefore I used the pipette tools to pick out the colours from the lips and make the triangles bolder and match them to create continuity throughout the digipak.
5. The poster should link more to the album cover -- the poster needed to link more as it was advertising the album therefore I changed the poster to match the album cover giving more continuity and a better branding of my artist.
6. The back cover needed changing -- I completely changed my back over to link in more with the rest of the digipak and the video, I used the lips I had used in a previous slide however added some distortion to give it more manipulation and make it more interesting.
7. The back cover font was too big -- I made the font on the back cover smaller as it was too big and made it look less authentic.
8. I also added binders and changed the font on the binder to create more synergy wit the rest of the digipak.
Sunday, 11 February 2018
Slide Ideas
Other Digipak Slide Idea's
These are some of the Idea's i tired out for my digpak before deciding on which slides to use for the final thing:
OTHER SLIDE IDEAS by amelia bazzone
These are some of the Idea's i tired out for my digpak before deciding on which slides to use for the final thing:
Friday, 9 February 2018
Tuesday, 6 February 2018
Monday, 5 February 2018
Thursday, 1 February 2018
Tuesday, 30 January 2018
Updated digipak 2
Updated digipak 2
This is my updated digipak with the added binder and my updated poster.
This is my updated digipak with the added binder and my updated poster.
Binder
Binder
The binder for my digipak, I made it grey to match with the front and back cover and added the coloured triangles to again match with the rest of the digipak and to add a contrast with the monochrome colours.
The binder for my digipak, I made it grey to match with the front and back cover and added the coloured triangles to again match with the rest of the digipak and to add a contrast with the monochrome colours.
Updated Digipak
Updated Digipak
After getting feedback from my last digipak I realised that some of my digipak panels needed more manipulation therefore I changed the top right panel of 3 overlapped lips as it was two similar to the left hand side. I changed the slide tho a new one that has rows of lips as I still wanted to include them in my digipak and I wanted the inside to all link in with the glow in dark sections of our video and contrast with the outside of the digipak like with the city filming in our video.
OLD PANEL
NEW PANEL
Final Shot List
Final Shot List
By writing a list of all of our shots we have used in our video, it allowed me to see what variety of shots I had used and if there were any different angles or shots needed to add more diversity to the video. Furthermore, it also allowed me to see how many different shots we had whether I felt that correlated with the length and tempo of the song or whether I felt we needed to add more to our video.
Monday, 29 January 2018
Edit Diary 14
Edit Diary 14
This is the edit of our full video so far with all the blanks filled in, there is only the coloured powder shots at the end to add in
This is the edit of our full video so far with all the blanks filled in, there is only the coloured powder shots at the end to add in
Edit Diary 13
Edit Diary 13
Updated chorus with flare
This is our updated chorus where we have now filled the blank spaces we had previously left with the shots of our actress Lucy dancing with the red flare. We chose Lucy to dance with the red flare as she was wearing a red t shirt in the video, we thought it created a good effect when the flares matched the colure of the people dancing in them/holding them's t-shirts. We felt that interchanging between the different bright coloured flares would help build on the idea of colour and make our video look better overall. Furthermore, we felt adding more of the fare shots would add interest for the demographic as it's a change from shots of people dancing in their t shirts.
Updated chorus with flare
This is our updated chorus where we have now filled the blank spaces we had previously left with the shots of our actress Lucy dancing with the red flare. We chose Lucy to dance with the red flare as she was wearing a red t shirt in the video, we thought it created a good effect when the flares matched the colure of the people dancing in them/holding them's t-shirts. We felt that interchanging between the different bright coloured flares would help build on the idea of colour and make our video look better overall. Furthermore, we felt adding more of the fare shots would add interest for the demographic as it's a change from shots of people dancing in their t shirts.
Saturday, 27 January 2018
Edit Diary 12
Edit Diary 12
Amplification editing
We used the idea of Goodwin's theory of amplification by editing an extreme close up of our actor Jack's eyes opening one the lyrics "Can't take my eyes up of it". Furthermore, we thought to broke up a longer shot of Jack walking and lip syncing as it would be boring for demographics to watch and by adding a shot in-between it breaks it up and also keeps to the fast paced editing of the rest of the video and edits on the beat.
Amplification editing
We used the idea of Goodwin's theory of amplification by editing an extreme close up of our actor Jack's eyes opening one the lyrics "Can't take my eyes up of it". Furthermore, we thought to broke up a longer shot of Jack walking and lip syncing as it would be boring for demographics to watch and by adding a shot in-between it breaks it up and also keeps to the fast paced editing of the rest of the video and edits on the beat.
Friday, 26 January 2018
Edit Diary 11
Edit Diary 11
This is the updated version of our video up until the second verse, we have now filmed the red flare with our actress Lucy and therefore we were able to fill in the blank gaps we had previously in the video. This has made our video look more complete and has helped us to move on with the final parts of the editing.
This is the updated version of our video up until the second verse, we have now filmed the red flare with our actress Lucy and therefore we were able to fill in the blank gaps we had previously in the video. This has made our video look more complete and has helped us to move on with the final parts of the editing.
Edit Diary 10
Edit Diary 10
After getting feedback from our video, we were advised to try adding some slow motion shots to our video to contrast the fast paced editing and quick cuts with the slow motion shots. We chose to slow down the flare shots as we thought it would look cool have the smoke floating past the camera in slow motion and create a good effect that will add interest as it would differ from the rest of our video.
After getting feedback from our video, we were advised to try adding some slow motion shots to our video to contrast the fast paced editing and quick cuts with the slow motion shots. We chose to slow down the flare shots as we thought it would look cool have the smoke floating past the camera in slow motion and create a good effect that will add interest as it would differ from the rest of our video.
Firstly, I went to the tool bar along the top and clicked on the timer
I then clicked on the speed list and selected slow to create the slow motion effect
Once I selected the slow option this appeared on the video and it was in slow motion
Finally, I then looked at the different percentage options and played around with the different speeds to see with ones I think works best with the rest of my video.
Tuesday, 23 January 2018
Edit Diary 9
Edit Diary 9
Dance Grid Edit
We played around with some different editing techniques to try and add some variation to our video and make it more interesting for demographics to watch rather than repeating lots of the same dancing shots. We thought it would be best on the last 'Dance, Dance, Dance' of the chorus as it would add a better effect and more of a climax to the end of the chorus. Moreover, we felt it also added conclusion to the chorus as we have separate shots of different people dancing and then this grid edit brings it them all together at the end of the chorus.
Dance Grid Edit
We played around with some different editing techniques to try and add some variation to our video and make it more interesting for demographics to watch rather than repeating lots of the same dancing shots. We thought it would be best on the last 'Dance, Dance, Dance' of the chorus as it would add a better effect and more of a climax to the end of the chorus. Moreover, we felt it also added conclusion to the chorus as we have separate shots of different people dancing and then this grid edit brings it them all together at the end of the chorus.
Edit Diary 8
Edit Diary 8
This is our first edit if the second verse the song where have added our third colure change of the video however we still have some blank spaces in the video where we are planning to film our red flare shots with one of our actresses. We had previously planned to film but the weather was very windy and we learnt from our previous attempt with our actor Jack that the flare wouldn't work in these weather conditions therefore we have had to postpone filming until a later date but were are trying to film as soon as possible so that we can add the shots in and make our video feel more complete.
This is our first edit if the second verse the song where have added our third colure change of the video however we still have some blank spaces in the video where we are planning to film our red flare shots with one of our actresses. We had previously planned to film but the weather was very windy and we learnt from our previous attempt with our actor Jack that the flare wouldn't work in these weather conditions therefore we have had to postpone filming until a later date but were are trying to film as soon as possible so that we can add the shots in and make our video feel more complete.
Edit Diary 7
Edit Diary 7
CHORUS SPINNING
To make the reverse spinning in the 'Dance,Dance,Dance' lyrics in the chorus of the video we used three different video's of our actress Imogen and reversed the one in the middle to create a different effect and add interest to our video as it's different to the other editing techniques we have included and give the video more variation from normal dancing shots.
CHORUS SPINNING
To make the reverse spinning in the 'Dance,Dance,Dance' lyrics in the chorus of the video we used three different video's of our actress Imogen and reversed the one in the middle to create a different effect and add interest to our video as it's different to the other editing techniques we have included and give the video more variation from normal dancing shots.
Firstly, I added the video's I wanted then I selected the timer tool on the tool bar across the top
I then ticked the reverse box to make the video go backwards and create the effect I wanted
This icon then appeared on the selected video and I cropped it down to the size I wanted it to be to fit on the beats on the song
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